good work you have great potentials. Try to work harder to improve your level like we all do. You made some mistakes like in line 17: "learning language depend.." I think "learning a language depends on.." or "learning languages depends on.." is better. line 6: "there are a few people" I think it should be like" there are few students..." because is too general. rabeb
I wanted to thank you for sharing your experience with us ! It is true that we are facing little issues with the building of the institute and the shortage of rooms! But I take it as an additional motive to find better ways to improve our world through English and studies ! It is also a way of escaping.
I hope that you will take into consideration your friends comments and encouragements when writing your second draft!
Here are a few additional comments:
- L9 . But I was wrong ( without parentheses) -L15 delete "that" and start a new sentence - L19 "Different.some ....."
-L 21 Unfortunately " instead of "unlucky"
thanks again !
-L22 " Will try to find solutions to this problem"
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ReplyDeleteI like it.However, u should have said 'would be boring' instead of 'would have been boring'...gd work =)
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ReplyDeleteyou are right, I will pay more attention next time. thanks !!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI love your work and the way you express your own ideas and experience. Although there are some mistakes, the overall is okay.
ReplyDeletegood work i love it and i like hw u defend ur ur point and ur arguments
ReplyDeletekeep working ;)
good work you have great potentials. Try to work harder to improve your level like we all do. You made some mistakes like in
ReplyDeleteline 17: "learning language depend.." I think "learning a language depends on.." or "learning languages depends on.." is better.
line 6: "there are a few people" I think it should be like" there are few students..." because is too general.
rabeb
@nasreddine abdelwaheb Hamada, thnks ^^
ReplyDelete@Chelbi Marwene,thanks,I'm glad that u like it :)
ReplyDeleteHi Manel,
I wanted to thank you for sharing your experience with us !
It is true that we are facing little issues with the building of the institute and the shortage of rooms! But I take it as an additional motive to find better ways to improve our world through English and studies ! It is also a way of escaping.
I hope that you will take into consideration your friends comments and encouragements when writing your second draft!
Here are a few additional comments:
- L9 . But I was wrong ( without parentheses)
-L15 delete "that" and start a new sentence
- L19 "Different.some ....."
-L 21 Unfortunately " instead of "unlucky"
thanks again !
-L22 " Will try to find solutions to this problem"
Tell us what do you think of the express yourself project Manel?
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