I made some mistakes because I did not pay attention. but also there are lots of things I didn't know like "fluent " and Capital for I. I will do better next time !
good work Abdelkader, but you made some mistakes and that's normal we've all started like that and we're still learning. I've noticed that you use the article "the" sometimes in wrong places: line 6: "the English programs" line 16: " the difficult words" in these cases you can omit them. Anyway keep your hard word and never give up. you need to work hard to improve your level and don't worry it's not that difficult. rabeb
Well done . Abdelkader , i trully cheer for your four excellent methods . And they are by the way very effective . regardless , to some mistakes you did , which you can prevent them lets say easil
Good job Abdelkader!
ReplyDeleteI liked the flow of ideas and the fact that your essay is well organised.
Mrs Rezig
do you think it's ok to say " i chooses" ? line 2
ReplyDeleteand I should be always in capital !
line 4 " that I do to be as now" is not clear to me. What did you want to say?
too much or too many magasines Abdelkader?
line 9 I think you meant to say :looking for opportunities to practice.
well speakers or fluent speakers of English?
you cannot use teachers , you can ask for their help ( line 15)
"no one is born a genious" (line 25)!
keep up the good work!
Thanks Mrs Rezig for the feedback.
DeleteI made some mistakes because I did not pay attention. but also there are lots of things I didn't know like "fluent " and Capital for I.
I will do better next time !
Gueddour
good work Abdelkader, but you made some mistakes and that's normal we've all started like that and we're still learning.
ReplyDeleteI've noticed that you use the article "the" sometimes in wrong places:
line 6: "the English programs"
line 16: " the difficult words"
in these cases you can omit them.
Anyway keep your hard word and never give up. you need to work hard to improve your level and don't worry it's not that difficult.
rabeb
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ReplyDeleteWell done . Abdelkader , i trully cheer for your four excellent methods . And they are by the way very effective . regardless , to some mistakes you did , which you can prevent them lets say easil
ReplyDeletethanks bro !
DeleteThis is the first time I talk about my learning style !
Gueddour