Hi , Ms Maatouk . You're definetly right , isnt necessary to start each essay with "English Language Learning" . But in my first essay , i should make it clear to
God... you reminded me of my first trumbling steps to learning english .those days were the best .as for you're wriring it's clear that you've accomplished a lot and I admire that strong and determinent will to learn in you and I 'm sure that you're gonna be someone great in life.keep up the good work
I'm glad to hear this . Your words are supportive to me . I won't disappointed neither u nor anyone who has trusted me . And thank you deeply for that , i hope i be a usefull someone in the society in my future . I also promise you i'm gonna work harder in order to get my english level higher . Then my dream will become real . Thank you again Takou . You're appreciated
Yeah . You absolutely right Mrs , i've realized them , when i came back home to review what i hve just written back then . But i promise you i won't make the same mistakes in the next Draft .
what I liked about this essay is the language, it's obvious that you have huge potentials to speak as a native speaker although you have some typing mistakes like: "hat" maybe you mean that/"having kinda". But don't worry you're still at the begining so don't give up and try your best to become better as we all do. Rabeb
I truly happy about wat u said Rabeb . Your words chilled me up and gave me a great desire to improve my skills in english language . I promise you i will not make the same mistakes . When i made tjhem i was rushed in to finish the article as possible as i can .im just paving my path of being the best english speaker . To be pricise im still chasing my dream. Hopefully you fullfiled your dream . Eventually i wanna thank you for your great words . May God bless us and be with us .
Hi Sahbi. Thank you for submitting this. It's especially nice to see someone motivated and inspired by music. I can tell by the way you write that you listen to a lot of native English speakers, perhaps in songs and films, and this is good. You just need to be careful about some of the differences in the way we speak and write.
For example, in the first sentence in the second paragraph, you write, "The English language and I, we have a long history together." This is a very natural way to speak; however, in writing, it is better to be more concise: "The English language and I have a long history together."
Also be careful with words like "kinda" and "wanna." We use them all the time in speaking, and they can be appropriate when chatting online, but it is best to avoid them in other writing. In this case, it would be very natural to say, "I was kinda having problems with learning pronunciation," but it is better to write, "I was having some problems with learning pronunciation."
One last thing--the quote at the end is normally attributed to Nietzsche, a German existentialist. It looks like Tupac was quoting him when he said, "That which does not kill us makes us stronger."
Hi Michael . First of all i want to thank you for all these explanations you made . I really appreciate this . I have read your reply several times , bcause , i found alot of criticism , which i loved it . I like who tell me where my mistakes are . Second of all , music has been one of the ways that taught me english language . i will not be ungrateful to what my teachers has done to me so far , truth should be told . Then , About my first mistake . Your definetly correct , i should hve been more careful , during , the taping , i realized that there was another way to write it correctly . For the second mistake . I thought , i can use words such "kinda" and " wanna" in such article . However , i will avoid these type of traps in my second draft . By the way, i have started writing my second draft today . In other hand , the quotation , i made mistake about the rightfull owner , and i think is not easy to say it belongs to someone , while , it belongs to someone else . So next time i will do a real research on anything i say to make everything clear for everyone . It's a massive honor for me to know someone like you . Someone who opened my eyes at many things . Because , i need all types of comments whether dispraise or not , i don't have any problem i accept any of them with open-hearted . Thank you from the depth of my heart . Mark out my words Micheal , my next draft will be fabulous and without any mistakes . Hope so ofcourse
Hi Sahbi,
ReplyDeleteIt is clear that you really like English !
why not start the essay with "English language learning " . I don't think "the"
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what do you think?
Ms Maatouk.
Hi . yes i like it so much , it's beyond anyone mind
ReplyDeleteHi , Ms Maatouk . You're definetly right , isnt necessary to start each essay with "English Language Learning" . But in my first essay , i should make it clear to
ReplyDeleteGod... you reminded me of my first trumbling steps to learning english .those days were the best .as for you're wriring it's clear that you've accomplished a lot and I admire that strong and determinent will to learn in you and I 'm sure that you're gonna be someone great in life.keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteI'm glad to hear this . Your words are supportive to me . I won't disappointed neither u nor anyone who has trusted me . And thank you deeply for that , i hope i be a usefull someone in the society in my future . I also promise you i'm gonna work harder in order to get my english level higher . Then my dream will become real . Thank you again Takou . You're appreciated
ReplyDeleteI think there is a typing mistake line three in the introduction "there are the main reasons" the? Maybe it should be three ?
ReplyDeleteMrs Rezig
Yeah . You absolutely right Mrs , i've realized them , when i came back home to review what i hve just written back then . But i promise you i won't make the same mistakes in the next Draft .
ReplyDeletewhat I liked about this essay is the language, it's obvious that you have huge potentials to speak as a native speaker although you have some typing mistakes like: "hat" maybe you mean that/"having kinda". But don't worry you're still at the begining so don't give up and try your best to become better as we all do.
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I truly happy about wat u said Rabeb . Your words chilled me up and gave me a great desire to improve my skills in english language . I promise you i will not make the same mistakes . When i made tjhem i was rushed in to finish the article as possible as i can .im just paving my path of being the best english speaker . To be pricise im still chasing my dream. Hopefully you fullfiled your dream . Eventually i wanna thank you for your great words . May God bless us and be with us .
ReplyDeleteHi Sahbi. Thank you for submitting this. It's especially nice to see someone motivated and inspired by music. I can tell by the way you write that you listen to a lot of native English speakers, perhaps in songs and films, and this is good. You just need to be careful about some of the differences in the way we speak and write.
ReplyDeleteFor example, in the first sentence in the second paragraph, you write, "The English language and I, we have a long history together." This is a very natural way to speak; however, in writing, it is better to be more concise: "The English language and I have a long history together."
Also be careful with words like "kinda" and "wanna." We use them all the time in speaking, and they can be appropriate when chatting online, but it is best to avoid them in other writing. In this case, it would be very natural to say, "I was kinda having problems with learning pronunciation," but it is better to write, "I was having some problems with learning pronunciation."
One last thing--the quote at the end is normally attributed to Nietzsche, a German existentialist. It looks like Tupac was quoting him when he said, "That which does not kill us makes us stronger."
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ReplyDeleteHi Michael . First of all i want to thank you for all these explanations you made . I really appreciate this . I have read your reply several times , bcause , i found alot of criticism , which i loved it . I like who tell me where my mistakes are . Second of all , music has been one of the ways that taught me english language . i will not be ungrateful to what my teachers has done to me so far , truth should be told . Then , About my first mistake . Your definetly correct , i should hve been more careful , during , the taping , i realized that there was another way to write it correctly . For the second mistake . I thought , i can use words such "kinda" and " wanna" in such article . However , i will avoid these type of traps in my second draft . By the way, i have started writing my second draft today . In other hand , the quotation , i made mistake about the rightfull owner , and i think is not easy to say it belongs to someone , while , it belongs to someone else . So next time i will do a real research on anything i say to make everything clear for everyone . It's a massive honor for me to know someone like you . Someone who opened my eyes at many things . Because , i need all types of comments whether dispraise or not , i don't have any problem i accept any of them with open-hearted . Thank you from the depth of my heart . Mark out my words Micheal , my next draft will be fabulous and without any mistakes . Hope so ofcourse
ReplyDeletei like ur love fr english language and i encourage u to keep going and get ur acheivment :)
ReplyDeleteHi Sahbi ,
ReplyDeletetell us what did you think of the idea of writing about our own English language learning strategies?
Well . i think it's an intersting idea to do such thing like that , im really happy about your own English language learning starategies
ReplyDeletetry to make a better version of your first draft without altering the ideas !
ReplyDeleteGood luck!